Guys, while you left for Hollywood I went through out final practise shoot edited sequence and have noted down major elements we left out that makes our piece not make sense and flow properly. I also got feedback from ms dymioti:
Missing shot
- Turning of the radio and looking at the shed then leaving- he doesn't actually turn of the radio it just stops after the news announcement
- Shot of the camera leaving the shed and sliding across the floor
- Need more CU of in shed -eyes-cut between each look
- Polaroids!
- Reaction shot of toast popping
- CU of eyes looking at shed
- Say news date at the start of the radio announcement- because he is OCD wouldn't he know exactly when the news would be on and let music play after as he walked to turn off the radio
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